Eternal_Night_

your writing is similar to another by the name of Devil_Paragan/evil dao

why is the chapter so fricking short?

sounds fun

so, if you don't mind me asking what is the mc's alignment because I saw the villain tag so I'm wondering if he is chaotic neutral or chaotic evil?

ok, let me give you an example you: "Hey sir....Is there any car I an steal from you?" Amir asked Me trying to be helpful: "Hey sir....Is there a car I can steal for you?" you: "Hey....isn't my employee of the month." Me trying to be helpful: "hey....if it isn't my employee of the month." oh and it's listener not lister and in that context it's listen not listener ok let's get back this you: "Man like you said I had no other option.....I could need some right now." Me trying to be helpful: "Men like you said guys like me had no other option .....I need some cash right now." imma stop here hope you see what I mean with this.

not the grammar necessary it's just character interactions are kind of weird.

A shame really but oh well hope your story is interesting.

grammar

so, are you Devil_Paragon/Evil_Dao? And if so welcome back if not well you got to be him/her because your writing styles are the same.

didn't read it yet but from the synopsis the writing somewhat reminds me of the author Devil_Paragon/Evil_Dao hope it is him/her but if it isn't I'll still read it if it's interesting, so for now imma rate it 5 stars atleast till I read the story hope it's worth 5 stars.