Terimar

I just checked through your profile to see if this fanfiction has come out. Not finding it, i went to look for something to read through the tags and did not even immediately notice that i had opened the work that i had checked a couple of minutes before) In any case, it's 5 stars. Even if there are few chapters yet, you can be sure that it is deserved.

It was with Harry Potter that I can only remember "The Game Must Go On" from crossedge on ff, but there he could do it thanks to the artifact initially

Give this story more chapters!

The quality of the translation is quite good. According to the story itself, you can't say much yet, but the beginning and synopsis interested. And if this is a translation, then what is the name in the original?

I haven't read the story yet, I just want to say. You can ignore it, since you are the author, but I would advise you not to prescribe the relationships of minor characters in such detail. Firstly, you are writing a harem, and the relationship of MC with each girl will need to be prescribed at least a little. It would be better to pay attention to them, because in harem stories, paying attention to the relationships of minor characters will always be to the detriment of the relationship of MC. Secondly, most readers, especially about the harem, are not very interested in reading about the relationship of someone else, except MC. In addition, many readers have preferences in female characters, and if the mention that the girl is not with MC, the reaction will be normal, then many people may not like the details (personally, I'm just not interested in reading about the life of someone else other than MC (rare interludes are quite normal)). Thirdly, specifically in the case of Vali, he seems to be a fighting maniac, so in theory he should not pay attention to the relationship. Although here you can already register the characters as you like, so it's not so important

Even if at first the work seemed strange in places, especially with all the controversial reincarnations of the MC, but gradually it became interesting enough to even ignore mtl. So don't throw it away.

Even if at first the work seemed strange in places, especially with all the controversial reincarnations of the MC, but gradually it became interesting enough to even ignore mtl. Personally, I do not have the opportunity to access the sequel, so I would be grateful if you do and continue to post chapters.

What is the name of the original? Or how to find it?

I can say based on your other works the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.

So that's why the tea situation seemed familiar to me) Xavier's reaction and name MC reminded. I recently read a Chinese Marvel ff, which was just recommended in response to your request in another work. You were probably inspired by it) And no, it's not a reproach or something, just noticed. I can say based on your other works that the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.