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The plot is going slow. Severus is too polite and humble when it comes to girls and being a pushover with Hermoine, and he did not hide crucial pieces of information like in the previous chapters. He could hide the information about himself by not divulging too much information about himself to Professor Monica Locklear and about his spells to others in duelling chapters except to the Hale's. He should keep his self-creation spells to himself by not publishing them for catching future enemies by surprise. After all, Severus suppose to be a smart and cautious person.