King_Rattata

Uhh... Interesting??? One 4 star, one 3 star, and one 1 star review. This is... interesting.

I feel like that's the case too, but I've gotten comments before about how I'm too heavy for a pokemon fanfic (which is weird because it's really not that heavy), and I need to add more jokes to make it more lighthearted. I guess I can stop trying to appeal to the little kids though if it's distractingly forced.

He has met literally zero women in the entire story so far, or even in all my notes. If there's romance at all, chances are it will be an OC that I throw in there later on.

No, I believe effects is correct.

"There is no good and evil, only power." -Professor Quirrell

I think I get what you're saying here. He would have had more karma if he had done everything he did to help people, but apart from killing The Terror, he was forced to do everything else and he hated doing it, so he lost some karma points. He still got a lot for saving humanity on three occasions though.

This isn't a self insert; I don't agree with everything the main character does, especially starting around what will probably be around chapter 16. Though to be fair he hates them because their parents had him killed to feed them. He thinks if they didn't exist he wouldn't have had to die for them. (Not that that's correct. If the kids weren't there he would die for the parents instead.) He just needs someone to hate to deal with the trauma basically.

Well, more like a soul literally created by the devil, but alright.

Granted, he doesn't actually know what those numbers mean specifically. The potential could be out of a million for all he knows. But high usually means good, so that's just what Dust went with. His guess is later confirmed by a Marshadow having a potential that he cannot recognize but is greater than ten. I'll add his thoughts about the numbers in since I think there are others that are worried about it.

Love that fanfic. Sad it got dropped.