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The writing is really repetitive and it makes it a bit awkward at some time. So can already see a character development and I can clearly see that the Author is trying to make a complex world development. Good so far but could be better

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Great story so far, good development, but your sypnosis could be better however. You give a real personality to your characters and that is my favourite aspect

So far there is just one problem, you did not give the power levels of the gods. I would really like to know who is the most powerful god out of all of them

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You have a really good story here, but honestly, your sypnosis needs to improve because I nearly skipped your story because of it. Great story tho

This is a really good story, however, given how hard and complex the story already is, it might be hard to develop the story correctly. I hope the next chapters will not be bad because of that

I love this story alot. My favorite character is Breta because she reminds me a lot of my little sister who is funny and sometimes careless.

I really love the play style as well as the plot of the story. The way things are going, I bet this novel with become one of the best if you try to improve your writing skills