I will give updates to soon I need some time . Just wait

It was a good book. No words to speak . I am waiting for a update . I was nice love story . I story abt historical love at beginning was nice.

It has a good plot and intersting character. The character as good chance to improve in this world . Keep up with your work . Make the devil or enemies strong So the character can improve this power and become strong .

Nice work . Just try to make the words easy to understand . Over all it was a good work . The chapter just started try to keep up a work . All the best .

Thanks for thr reply

It has a good way of explaining the feeling of thr characters. I enjoyed the way of writing. Just make the character development properly. It will be nice if the potential of the character increase. You made a good job work. I am waiting for other chapters to be released.

Ok sir, I will try to change it

The chapter is so cool.

Yes sir, I will make sure about it

Sir, where will you post my novel

The character as has nice background and the story is very easy to visualise just by reading . I just enjoyed by reading it ... You must updated it properly

I really started to love this novel .. The chapters are so nice to read and interesting

Thanks for the reply I will do my level best

It's good to read the chapter and the character has been described perfectly in the first chapter. Don't confuse the timeline work pls except that everything was nice