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zed_344 months agoPublicado porloving the story keep it up[img=update][img=update]
- zed_345 months agorespondió a EmpyreanSerenity
name?
- zed_346 months agoComentado por
is he going to interact with young VI an Jinx?
- zed_346 months agoComentado por
+1
- zed_346 months agoComentado por
*begin
- zed_347 months agoPublicado por
reposting another review: Stolen. original is on fanficiton.net with the same name, last updated in 2018 with 389k words. you've made the chapters shorter as well.
- zed_347 months agoComentado por
this chapter is so bad it hurts, it makes no sence to add 2/3 of the chapter on something that dosnt bring anything positive, and 1/3 for copy paste dialog of the original
- zed_347 months agoPublicado por
cant even research the names of places and groups...............................................................................................................
Este libro ha sido eliminado. - zed_347 months agorespondió a Beast_kk
he cant make anything its a translation