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* cut out the repeating stuff
I have read about 150 chapters so far. I like the story and setting but honestly there needs to be someone editing the story for mistakes. And when he is looting, I wish the author would cut hot the repeating stuf and give us a one paragraph summary, like 20x walkers looted, 20 cores, 2,000 ML blood, 20x cores, 20x upgrade crystals. After the first zombie of each type you could easily shorten it to just loot and total experience. And then list any extra drops that are out of the norm. Also stop repeating things we already know if they have been mentioned in the last 100 chapters. I would also suggest the author reread their story and check for continuity errors to either fix them or find an in world reason to explain them. Over all I would recommend if you have patience.
The fall of these 3 will probably be from Noah
The author has posted only one chapter before, so I don’t know if there will be another chapter today.
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When are we getting that extra chapter?
To leave us here.
Well I can see the progression, but also it gives me something to read everyday so it’ good s
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