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First of all, have you seen the series Jake Long: The Western Dragon?
Why don't you upload more chapters?
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The devil is going to get depressed XD
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Brother, I like your story and even more that you update it often, but I'll let it cook a little longer to read many chapters in a row.
I feel like Roberta is taking too long. It would be better to declare her feelings and then create a relationship from that instead of gathering unimportant information.
Brother, honestly, I agree that Lidia is the love interest. Finally, something different and not the same girls. Also, I'll be honest, she's beautiful and her personality improves as the plot progresses. Therefore, I like that she's the love interest.