very well done thus far .keep up the work

not utterly horrible .however decide on Mrs Catherine's proper name .for proper pronunciation when reading . also you do need some work to your craft . like this one said, it is not horrible, though could use some work brótha

amazing

a brilliantly intriguing story thus far .look well forward to reading more

thus far, an absolutely brilliant story. So much thought and detail went into every bit of it