don't mean to rush you but I can't wait till your next on and for the reason I put 4/5 on the writing quality is because some of your "in" or "on" are mixed and the 3/5 for the updates is because I've been waiting for a little or more over a month have a great day and once again can't wait tell your next chapter byeeeee.

Well I loved this chapter the distinction In it was amazing It’s Better than mine that I wrote Sorry that’s All I have

This was a touching chapter it really Got to me