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At some point, you're going to be in so much trouble for writing stuff like this, but I love it man. You manage to convey everything perfectly, a bit more time away from background would be great though
Starting off strong holy shit, what a start
Is that foreshadowing maybe?
Whatchu mean bouncing?
Kinda seeming like a dommy mommy vibe man
Could you please explore the systema(?) more? I'm genuinely so lost on it
Did it spare him on purpose? Or because it thought he was weak? Did it think it killed him with the tail flip?
Okay, I'm a big fan. So, writing quality is amazing, as usual. More descriptions would be great, but overall really good!
I've been your fan since the first chapter, is this really the ending or is there more? You said bonus chapters, but are those connected to the story? I loved how you handled the characters are their motives, this was amazing man