Hulisani_Mudau

Smile property?? [img=faceslap]

The grammar is bad but the story seems a bit interesting it's just hard to follow. I'm sure on once Lisa sees the man she will regret it

Overall I loved this story. From past love, old love to new found love to finally finding the one you've loved throughout your life time. Perfect ending

Stalker vibes Adler

What I'm getting is that Mona(stepmom) entered the marriage with a kid(Natila) as well. So they could be close in age

This has the potential to be a good story. But how you mistaken the pronouns leaves readers confused

I'm confused. Too much going on with extremely little details. Feels like a lot of important details were left out

Are we going to get more insight on how she died in further chapters?

Loved this chapter

I'm sure he loves playing knight when it comes to her