Nicola_McBlane

This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon