Zane_Tam

Finally!! Took you long enough.

If I may give some advice, don't make your characters OP if you don't want them to be OP, like in your last novel. You made the Kid OP, from the start but later you started weakening him to the point where he lost to weaker characters even though he destroyed the likes of Orochimaru and Obito when he was just starting out. That didn't make sense and was pretty annoying for us readers, but all of that can still be ignored. We can just say the boy became arrogant. I can accept his arrogance in sparring, but not when his counterparts wanted to kill him. Also, he would give his enemies time to unleash their full power instead of destroying them from the start. He made the same mistake multiple times but never corrected it, but the dealbreaker for me was when he told Minato the truth about his existence. With that, you pretty much destroyed the novel for me right then and there. The whole manga incident destroyed everything.

This is really easy

You know mister Author although you tend to ruin your stories but until then you always make them interesting

Why???!!!!

Hey i know you!! You're the guy who wrote that stupid story!!

Well maybe now Kakashi will train Naruto rather than throwing him away to the garbage

Are you stupid or insane Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara, and Neji all either have a bloodline limit or have powers that they were not born with same as you so why limit yourself even worse this isnt even a normal exam!!!!

i was actually calling the white one Light