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Thanks for the feedback and for being my first reader. By all means, go ahead, suggestions are always appreciated.

Oh? My fault, I was revising some of the dialogue and deleted a major part of the chapter. I've now updated it, what you missed should be there now, but I must say that it is a lot😭🙏

Zya is definitely a character some people aren't going to like too much. She the Misato of this Novel frfr, Asher is mentally a child when you think about it. Overall, novel is good so far, Bale got that whole lightskinned tendency to hype frfr. Bro keep hyping himself up. Skystrider will be Skystrider so I expect a large number of deaths or mayhem taking place.

Kinda sexist ngl

After an hour of reading, I'd say that the overdoing of erotica is the only flaw. I really hope the author make a few changes

Ayo😂

Dude, we're all broke.

Dude, we're all broke.

Finally, a Harem Erotica with an actual plot existing! That aside, you're going to be choking with laughter while reading this, Vyn and Von are one of the most perverse main characters you'll find In Webnovel.

Thank you for the review!