Jimbai3870

15,000 pounds is not 15 tons. 30000lbs is too heavy for an RV

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Lost me here dude. Good luck on the rest of your story.

Imagine wanting to protect your brother and you have future knowledge or access to it. And don’t abuse it on the justification that your focused on your brother.you contradict yourself and make no sense. It’s just not believable you want to protect someone and know you’re weak and have zero potential to get stronger unless you go find something to do so. Nothing you can say will make sense.

Man. I was very interested in this story due to exploring ancient magic and possibly being an op smart character. Instead I got a remarkably idiotic and forgetful character. Admittedly I didn’t get very far in the story. I simply couldn’t take the cliches and things that just plain don’t make sense. How he acts. Characters act. How they speak. If the story gets better later on props to you. But imo I can’t see it getting better with the groundwork you’ve already laid.

And how do you explain the field guide…? Quick slot spells.. I’m judging hard right now but I’ll continue.

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This is not your story.

Nah you should’ve used context clues and your brain a little bit. You can’t do everything for someone.

You clearly misunderstood what I said.