Beyblade_Enjoyer
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Beyblade_Enjoyer4mthrespondió a Nyx_Alexander17I try to make 1 chapter a week, when I initially started the story I did 2/3 a week because I had vacation.
Kaminari was taken aback as the nurse's words hit him. "Nine tails attack?" he repeated, unsure of what she meant. The nurse looked at him with concern before answering, "Around a year ago, the nine tails attacked and killed many people."- Beyblade_Enjoyer4mthrespondió a SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
Huh I researched about it? Did I do somthing wrong?
As he watched closely, she demonstrated how to channel chakra into a sheet of paper with perfect precision. He listened attentively and then attempted the task himself. After a few minutes of intense concentration, he managed to complete the task successfully. However, he noticed that fifty percent of his paper started to wrinkle, thirty-five percent became damp, and the remaining fifteen percent caught fire and started to turn into ash. - Beyblade_Enjoyer4mthrespondió a EtherealStar
The first few chapters are just introductions to be honest this is my first book and I try to improve every time. I will take your advice to mind, the relationships with the characters are starting of slow the Mc Ofcourse already knows adachi and noya. For the story il try and focus on the “Now” aspect of it. I personally think it’s far easier to just write about the now instead of the future or past. Thanks for the comment and advice hopefully you enjoyed the chapter.
Ch 9 Chapter 9: First Academy Day - Beyblade_Enjoyer4mthrespondió a Maximus_DukeCh 12 Chapter 12: Blowing the competition away
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Professor_Light
Yeah he will learn an elemental clone too but I didn’t say that the shadow clone jutsu would be easy to learn so maybe learning a elemental clone first would be easier
He asked her if she could teach him the shadow clone jutsu. She was a bit skeptical about it and asked him where he learned about it. He shrugged a bit before answering, "I learned about the clone Jutsu from the library and asked my teacher if there was a higher form of it, and that's when he told me about the shadow clone Jutsu." Hayami took a little while before giving him an answer: "Alright, I will teach it to you if you manage to master the clone Jutsu and pass the exam." He gave her a nod and told her he was going to pass with flying colors! - Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Professor_Light
Yeah that makes sense will do!
(I searched around the internet for E and D rank water jutsus but couldn't find any good ones, so I decided to take some from canon and fandoms. I will make my own jutsus once the story progresses.) - Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Daoisto0M3esCh 4 Chapter 4: The Golden Eyes
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a MrMikeCh 7 Chapter 7: Even More Progress
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a LycarusCh -2 Synopsis + Info
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Professor_Light
Yes that’s true however only utilizing the gentle fist seems useless Of course majority of Hyugas the majority of still focus on that entirely There is a small minority that evolves their other skills. And not everyone will teach him.
After returning home, she gestured for him to sit down on the couch and took out some items from her bag. "This is chakra paper," she explained, holding out two sheets of paper. "We can use this to determine your Elemental affinity." Kaminari nodded in understanding as he looked at the papers. She then proceeded to demonstrate how to use the chakra paper. She took one sheet and held it between her fingers. She poured chakra into it, and as a result, around seventy-five percent of the paper became damp while the remaining twenty-five percent crumbled into dust. - Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Mr_NightCh 4 Chapter 4: The Golden Eyes
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a youraqCh 3 Chapter 3: Suspense And Transmigration
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a youraqCh -2 Synopsis + Info
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a youraq
Oh yeah I see what you mean will be fixed thanks for the feedback.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Maximus_DukeCh 1 Chapter 1: Elemental Confrontation
- Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Maximus_Duke
Hey, so I am on vacation right now and I'm attempting to put some chapters out. But once I'm back home il try and do 2 chapters a week. Hopefully, you enjoyed the first chapter and the second one is gonna be even better.
Ch 1 Chapter 1: Elemental Confrontation - Beyblade_Enjoyer5mthrespondió a Moist_PossumCh 438 Chapter 434 : Situation of the Uchiha Clan