This would be better imo, as you already have a Tensura fic, but I hope this one won't be dropped.

Write the story you want to write. If the vocal minority don't like it - they can write their own fic. Constantly changing things for a couple of readers isn't productive and will harm the fic and your enjoyment for writing.

Much better than the old version imo. 10 years to a devil is like a month to humans though, doesn't seem like a lot.

Author, you're evil.

TFTC!

TFTC, I'll have to read up on this side story, never knew it existed.

Where can I get a wingman like this?

Good chapter, I just hope the Grayfia situation is handled better in this rewrite.

Never seen someone so happy over a green hat

The author is superb at character interactions, and is able to convey emotion incredibly well in a natural and believable way. I'm a big fan of the author's other works, but I have to say that this is their best yet. Grammar and spelling are perfect, chapter length is great, character design is interesting and engaging. Really hope this doesn't get dropped.

TFTC, he's a menace, and I love it.

Ah, my old nemesis, we meet again.

Should have done this sooner, then the pearl clutchers would have been long gone, leaving us degenerates.

Pretty dang great. I was worried due to how OP the protagonist was at the start, but the story has been progressing really well, with a perfect balance of 'plot' and plot. Grammar and spelling are great too. Probably my favourite fic at the moment, highly recommended.

Still early but I like the direction the story is heading. OP protagonist who is pretty intelligent. Grammar and spelling is very good. Looking forward to more.

TFTC!

Is it Christmas already? TFTC!

TFTC

I don't mind what happens as long as it makes sense to his character and the story. My criticism in the previous story was that I didn't think it made sense with that character, not the act itself.