Funnypilz

Will of lightning may raise their conviction but it won't raise their maturity afaik right? Concerning Ei: I am not very familiar with Honkai Star Rail and iIdont think her actually being from Honkai Star Rail was explained? At least i don't remember reading it, my takeaway was that she had a past life in a modern world, nothing much is known about it and she gets reincarnated. If you did indeed explain that and I missed it it's my bad I guess.

Generally good quality writing, sometimes in my opinion to descriptive even, some expressions are used a little to often and feel repetetive. Flow of the Story i got nothing to complain about so far. The main Issue i have with this book is that Characters behave uncharacteristically, its mainly seen in Ei and her Squad, they don't talk like 4-6 Yo's even if they would act older than their age, its very unfitting, for Ei you can ofcourse always argue that its from her life, but she also often Talks very "swollen" basically doing speeches using big words, noone would ever talk like that in a conversation. Another plothole beeing why Ei has such a strong conviction, to train as hard, not wasting her 2nd Chance is nice but she is basically torturing herself, she would need some kind of tragic backstory or upcoming disaster she needs to be strong enough for to explain her determination. Overall still a solid read.

The ability is truant not Slaking

A True Counter to Dragons

thanks for the chapter

probably* :)

Well written monster evolution story, nothing too special but a very nice read.

adventurers*

Generally a really good read, but sometimes people seem to act out of character. e.g Why does Harry agree to the duel with Draco when it is said that he doesnt care about hhis reputation ad the only gain is "maybe he will stop bothering me", or why is ron in his circle of friends if mc is mature and the only thing ron does is beeing stupid and annoying everyone, he doesnt even tell ron when he is (W)ron(g).

Generally well written, but mc is just way too fucking stupid to make any sense.