TingTheWriter
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TingTheWriter2yrrespondió a GrimTheCatTruly😆😌
We're not in any danger since I discovered the secret of sweeping. Take that rock crabs, I am well versed in the art of sweeping. Trained and practiced for many years as a commoner who does house chores! Put your legs into it, find the right angles and use momentum to conserve energy!- TingTheWriter2yrComentado por
*gasp* How did you guess?
"Holy shit! Is that guy still human? Did he eat some power pills?" - TingTheWriter2yrrespondió a TingTheWriter
Also, another tip, you can downlaod the grammarly extension on chrome. It would help you by notifying you of your mistakes.
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Author-nim, please get someone to proofread your chapter! I already identified a few grammar mistakes in this chapter alone. Please, getting a friend or acquaintance to proofread your chapters will improve the chapter's quality by a lot!
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I think it would've been better if you replaces "shone" with lit up, promising start though!
Este capítulo ha sido eliminado. - TingTheWriter2yrrespondió a Royden_Lim
Thanks!
Este capítulo ha sido eliminado. - TingTheWriter3yrrespondió a Amyraluvsbts
+1
"Hmph! You better be thankful that I decided to come to your puny party!" Rosa sniggers.