Stoneby

Imho, but in my opinion he's just a pubertal ulcer.

I may say an unpopular opinion, but I love their dynamics. I really want them to become real friends. They are literally similar to each other in their very essence. But most likely MC will just kill Star to prove that he is stronger or something like that. To be honest, MC dominates everything and everything so much that it has become boring and perhaps because of this me just want a quiet friendship.

One of the strongest variations of the mirror scenes. Definitely cool.

Horizon controls reality and Nika bends it at will. So logically, Nika is the worst opponent for Horizon.

You didn't steal this fanfiction, did you? Because the original is called "A-Precise-Note" and there is a different name of the author. I'm just asking out of interest.

This is a good fanfiction with an interesting main character. But it feels like it started in the middle. There are many unknown terms, flashbacks, and storylines... to be honest, I would like to read the story from the very beginning, when the main character just appeared.

For God's sake, when and if you choose a romantic partner for the main character, show at least a little originality and do not use Daphne or Fleur, who are chosen by everyone. Actually, I'd be rooting for Ginny. I don't remember a single fanfiction where she was.

This is about 70% overkill. Kill a clown and a dwarf? This is quite normal. At least they're villains. Kill someone from the hero commission too. They were trying to control another person against his will. It's bad. Kill innocent people? Only scum will do it. I hope that MC will lose eventually because by doing such things he deserves to lose.

Every new sentence of this fic is a cringe. Every new detail, every new plot twist is a struggle with yourself to continue reading this garbage. I really don't understand why you might like this. That's without sarcasm. It's not going to get any better. On the contrary, it will only get worse. Am I too old and don't understand where there is at least some literary value? I wouldn't even read it drunk.

I've been wanting to know for a long time. Aren't there any tools on webnovel for editing posted chapters? Why explain a mistake when it can be fixed? Some kind of unnecessary complexity.