idk man, it just feels so cringe

Ridiculous, If this is not your book, at least put the real name of the author, you damn plagiarist.

No offense, but good lord, it is so cliché so boring and so dumb

Nahh, I think the first one is better

I suggest to all of you who want to read this novel to prepare yourself for various brain torture. Tbh, I'm 100% sure that the storyline of this fanfiction has been influenced in such a way by the author's distorted thinking, and I'm 1000% sure that the author is an acute masochist. Pathetic

pathetic, I hope I will never find a novel with this type of MC again in the future.. This is 100% trash. The author has a masochistic fetish

gimme some clue

Bruhh, there's a thing called water you know.

And yet, I imagine Westeros Kid is full of fat all over their bodies... like the average American kid nowadays :)

Broo.. what's different about this fanfic and the original manhua? I don't see any changes to the storyline here except for the change in Mc's name.

Bro, kapan buat novel baru lagi? Kangen bet gua ama novel fiksi ilmiah yang elu buat sebelumnya, favorit gua si buku permintaan sama Pertemuan tak terbatas, the best lah pokoknya dua novel tu

As for how Harems work, I don't think that's how it work. In my opinion, having a harem where the women compete healthy with each other is better than being able to get along well. At least they prioritize their love for the man. I'm going to be honest here, I don't really like the concept of same-sex love, because I think it's strange and not normal, even though in my area there are lots of people like that, I prefer straight conservative women rather than women with same-sex love or lesbians.

It's up to you to have an opinion. But in my opinion, if I were faced with a situation like that (like being so busy that I don't have time for love), then I would never make a harem, because let's be a little more realistic here, as we know a harem requires "power", if you don't even have time for them, then why would you create something as troublesome as a harem. therefore, I'm better off having a partner, at least I won't have the mental burden by seeing my girls making out with each other behind my back, and also at least they have more freedom when they are become my partners rather than being part of a harem

Teufelslied sounds good

Bruhh, the first thing that coming to my mind when you say beautiful instructors is Mrs. puff Lol

Damn bro, why does an interesting story like this have to be paid to read? It's so good that every line of this story connects directly to the heart, it's very edgy, but it's true. If only I were rich...

I wonder if this novel will be added with other elements besides Anima/manga/WN? I mean I'm pretty sure this novel will become even more interesting with the addition of a movie or manhwa/hua worlds, Like in the previous novel. Also, I hope that you don't rush into writing this novel because most if not all writers that doing that will cause the story to be forced, So please be patient and don't rush author. Btw, nice fanfic, hope that it will become more interesting as it goes on.

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This leylin side story thingy makes me feels boring af.

This is too forced dude, I was fine at first, but it geting worse when these DxD stuff was added. I know that I shouldn't complain about this since it was a fanfic about Bleach and DxD, but honestly, I expected more than this, man.These thing gives me a very bad sensation of cliché. I'm out, sorry. Ps: I'm not an Englishman so I use a translator