Scarlet_Wolf96

interesting story. While I was reading, I felt like I had entered the world of the "Halo" series. Good start, although quite complicated. I hope that in the next chapter or in other chapters, you will add an unexpected scene, or a scene that can make readers curious. Sometimes, sci-fi has the impression of a quite complicated mystery. Depends on the writing.

interesting intro. This is good because it makes me curious.

Interesting story. The plot is interesting. The storyline is enough to make me curious. However, I think it's only chapter 6 that I think is quite mindblowing.As long as it can create an unexpected scene and make the reader curious, I think that's enough.good job, author!!

i like this chapter

An interesting start and made me curious.

Interesting story. Even though I don't understand genres like systems or whatever they are called... I can understand the storyline of each chapter.Slow but sure.. it really nice and feels like follow the thread flow. Good job, author!

I think I've heard the name (kopi luwak) in the English version. But I don't think I need to discuss that. 🤭

Interesting story. It has several different elements and elements so that it is able to create a complicated storyline but can make readers feel curious. Maybe that's what I'm feeling right now. Even though the beginning of the chapter confused me, the longer I read, the more curious it made me.good job, authors..

So far... the story is quite interesting. Although the writing concept is quite confusing because several chapters that show dialogue and lines seem a little messy. Apart from that, it's been good. In fact, I also found the impression of the storyline which felt like a hidden mystery. Keep practicing, author!

Slight error. but the story can still be enjoyed..