EmberWyldes
I enjoy reading quite a lot. I heavily dislike incorrect grammar and the misuse of verbs. Warning - I am crazy and strange~
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I don’t know how good medical magic is in this world - but it doesn’t say the hero needs to be an active participant in the battle, just ‘alongside’. So, if you wanted to give the story a darker flavour, it might be possible to chop off all the hero’s limbs and carry him around in a box…
Yeah, but originally she was the goddess protector of women and children - men sexualised her and her priestesses to reduce their political and social power
Fujoshi: AND MEN! Don’t ignore half the population, spread the love 😜
Swamp alligators:
YOU FOOL! YOU SHOULD HAVE UPDATED KEEN EYE!!!!
Dude, it’s speed stat is 2 - just walk away
Like the Pokemon attack skill?
Pine sap doesn’t taste good, but apparently you can eat it if you get desperate enough
Nice to see he’s got confidence
Cave alligators -> swamp alligators
👍
At least you’re having fun
Leave tribe to get food every now -> Leave tribe to get food every now and then
Okay, girl, you need to man up a bit - it doesn’t matter how many annoyances there are, you just need to be careful how you wipe them out. Alien did it - one beastie emptied a ship all by itself! Surely a future dragon is better than a Xenomorph
Did you forget your species can breathe underwater?