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Lilith_Zenon1minComentado porThat episode completely glossed over the truly horrifying effect of just snapping all adults away. Millions of babies world wide will(did) die. Millions.
When Klarion was gone, Justinian smiled as Lords of Chaos lived to cause Chaos. His plan was for Klarion to send all the adults to another dimension leaving the kids behind. That way, he could take control of Terra with the kids as hostages.- Lilith_Zenon1drespondió a P_J_Sch
From me at least, sure~.
And after Trypticon was done, He asked Etharium for a Story, The Shark started with a Time he mett a Purple Kitsune with Infinit Tails and shared a Drink with her, the Light and Dark Gods coming to Recruit him and how he Crunched down on the Fools, of a Twelth Dimensional Eldritch God and the Shannanigans he got up to for the sake of keeping Boredome away - Lilith_Zenon2dComentado por
Ohh, dass meee~.
And after Trypticon was done, He asked Etharium for a Story, The Shark started with a Time he mett a Purple Kitsune with Infinit Tails and shared a Drink with her, the Light and Dark Gods coming to Recruit him and how he Crunched down on the Fools, of a Twelth Dimensional Eldritch God and the Shannanigans he got up to for the sake of keeping Boredome away - Lilith_Zenon2dComentado porCh 26 First step and farewells
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*Old Wizard voice* ONE YEAR CURSE!!! MANUAL BREATHING!
[PS: Also! Tell Hajime if he talks shit about me again I'll cast Testicular Torsion on him!] - Lilith_Zenon2drespondió a Saeko_Kaburagi(Hammer pic here, just replace the eye with a gun and make the scales black)
- Lilith_Zenon5dComentado por"Dragon Nest was born because of people who wanted to live in this unfair world. Young or adult, everyone believes that staying weak is a sin and becoming strong is a way to break their unwanted destiny."
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He should eventually upgrade the ticket upgrade system to get better rates all around~.
[Upgrading Tickets: Iron(1), Bronze(1), Silver(4), Gold(1)] - Lilith_Zenon10dComentado porAfter that he punched the trees, which also increased his strength and endurance. For the whole day, he either trained like this or went to catch fish and cooked them on the fire he created. He didn't use any equipment or his liquid metal and did everything with just his physical capability to increase his basic attributes.
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And here we see the MC trying his best not to wheeze.
"250000 from our sir over there, anybody wants to increase the bid, it's a super rare blueprint we are talking about, you might never get the chance to get another one." Robot spoke, encouraging others to bid. - Lilith_Zenon13dComentado por"Alright, but only a bit. She seemed petty enough to descend from wherever she resides and screw with people for any offense." Yin explained, hearing a silent scoff from Hajime.
- Lilith_Zenon17dComentado porCh 35 Uchiha Massacre Begins
- Lilith_Zenon17dComentado por"I don't touch children."
- Lilith_Zenon17dComentado porCh 19 Battle in Asgard
- Lilith_Zenon17drespondió a Shay_Michaels
Iz gud storeh~. (It's a good story~.)
We have sent this to officially accept your offer of a world government under your leadership. This acceptance has come to us after much discussion and discourse over your leadership, skills, talents, skills, powers, governance and accomplishments. We are excited to work with you as the heads of 'states' and wish to meet with you in a month's time to figure out some of the rules we will operate under... There was some issues with certain segments of society but ultimately the world-wide referendum was above 70%, those that chose to vote. - Lilith_Zenon19drespondió a HaremsHunter
And you need a body for it~.
"I'll make it so that you can have the memories of your time in the Reincarnation Centre, and I'll tell you about their location as well. Coupled with the unique skill Great Sage, that should be way more than enough for killing Issei, no?" - Lilith_Zenon21dComentado porA chapter ended in this universe but many chapters of Kai will continue in another universe as Naruto Uzumaki.
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This part I disagree with. It was not the best way to have her die. Because it was a third party, a party which had already gone an extra mile and helped her I add, it felt forced and and "So mote it be!" kinda deal. The Angel's have zero reason for wanting her to awaken her powers, they are not invested into her. Instead, you should have went through your system in some way. It would have demanded more of you time, but I honestly, truly believe it would have fit your story much better.
I have not, nor will I EVER nerf Talia. This was something I always knew, and will never change. Her powers being weakened by nigh-Omnipotent deities was simply the best way I can have her "die" in order to unlock her hidden power. And that weakening is obviously not permanent, and has already been lifted, after her regeneration. - Lilith_Zenon22drespondió a ArtoriaPendragon_
Because it was forced haha. You quite literally "Deus Ex Machinai" an event to get her to evolve. But rather, it was an "Angel" instead of "God." But the point stands. Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying your story, but you could have done that little bit so, SO much better. And it's slightly annoying, because I KNOW you can! You have the skills as a writer! It's not meant to disparage you, at least I don't want to, it's meant to just give you some constructive criticism.
A LOT of people got mad about her dying, and to them I ask "Do y'all have no patience whatsoever?" Like I don't want to be rude, but like have you never heard of something called "Story progression" and there's a thing called revealing more in the future, it happens a lot in fanfic. - Lilith_Zenon23dComentado por
That means a lot of people are having an absolutely horrid day~.
Demiurge is having a nice day . He is walking toward the throne room . After entering inside the throne room . He met with albedo .