May_Hope31

while the chapter promises another great story, I'm a bit disappointed that you're seemingly abandoning dancing with monsters. I've been patiently waiting through the last star-book but here is another one instead of a continuation

...talk about misunderstandings. I did not expect this plot twist

am I missing something? Didn't she feed him her blood and set a timer for him to go splat?Did you drop that idea midway or are we just gonna ignore that detail?

just take it. This story is all over the place from the start anyway and it doesn't get corrected either

why push her to be City lord when he intends to keep getting in her way anyway. He could've just taken over that position like she originally intended.I hope Dukes character gets some growth bc he's starting to get on my nerves and going in a negative direction

is there part of the paragraph missing?

it's fascinating how every single one of the guys automatically assumes they'll be the one to take it

please delete the repeat paragraph or the first one, whichever one is the correct one

why list all the stats again but without the skill if the main-point is that she gained one?

she should be about 26 I think, based on how old she was when she broke through