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These plot arcs are so dumb

At least bro acts like a mob character

These interactions are so dumb

Why start as a child if you aren’t going to be child actor? I thought it would be easy money and introduce you to important people

M. Mcl Sec or, mAll

Why is he such a wimp (mc)

Seems like so far the mc is here just to change the plot in directions the author prefers over the original and doesn’t have his own motivations

This book should be separated into 2 different book the first arc and the second arc are both really good, but the are completely separate in their focus. The first half should be the methods of rationality / experiments , while the second half is more plot based / getting stronger .

Plot hole …. With his current character he would of done a light search of herminies memories

If bro doesn’t kill him it’s too poor