Ickysauce

Saving Elia gets you nothing. She'll never love Jorah. Her kids will come first. She's not Jorah's responsibility and that was her choice. Saving Lyanna will net you MASSIVE points with both Ned and Robert. Plus cucking Lannister plans of making Cerci Queen. Then when the battle of the dawn comes around Ned and Robert will listen to you.

Even Kishimoto couldn't write Shikamaru right. Characters can't be smarter than the author. That's why he wrote him lazy.

The story is already running too slow. With he sporadic updates and half step chapters. There's a lot of room for more detail about the world around you. The only time we get any depth is when you monologue about your life philosophy. Other than that you're just hitting plot points. If you try to add lewds I doubt you would ever finish another story again.

Good fight. Much Thanks.

I will eviscerate you in fiction!

If the Dragon Veins are cannon is the gelel stone as well?

If Jorah has magic will he become like Jonny Appleseed and strat planting trees? For the gains.

I was hoping Lori would die.

It's your story. Don't stress about what other people may think. Just do your best.

All my stones everytime you post a chapter. You're #Juan on my list.