I don't think this is an original, i think it's a translation. I'm up for AU types of FanFiction, but I'd prefer if the characters are the same personality with their original counterpart, you can change the story all you want but never change oda's character personalities.

it's good, but its frustrating reading 'then' and 'than'. don't you know how different these two words are?

is this drop?

"Oh right, you died early" -Garp😂

I quite enjoy this. I hope you'll continue this unlike the food wars. It's been a while since I've read a young justice fanfic, some are just boring or dropped fanfics.

i enjoyed it a lot. it's good, a lot better than most of the fanfics. i quite like his double face persona, it's quite refreshing to read a one piece fanfic that has this kind of attitude.

told y'all i was right.

don't stop translating, it's better than the other translation.

pls don't stop translating this fic. it's good, i read the mtl, it's just killing my brain cells.....................................................

i guess no chap for today.

that sucks.

did the author said that he won't continue the story?

🥹🥲😭

I would prefer Alice over Mito, but it's your story. Do a poll please

drop

wow.

hmmm..

This message is quite familiar.🤔 Ahhh, the start of an abandoned story. Well, unexpected things happen.

I thought there's a bonus chapter?

you'll reach it. it's still early