experiment0789

Agian, in THE future.

Help me in THE future.

Your welcome. I'm sorry to say that I won't be finishing since it seems that web novel got rid of the fast pass system, so I won't be reading past the last unlocked chapter. I not going to say this is the best thing I ever read but considering everything this is pretty good and you should feel proud of it.

You mean no ONE can object to their relationship. (don't sweat it,if it makes you feel better, out of the few stories I have read on here from first time authors, your is pretty light on spelling and/or grammatical errors.)

1. take out the first you in "Hehe, how can I believe you what you say?" 2. It should be "She sent HER mana inside his body", not "She sent HIS mana inside his body".

Did you mean it to read, "as YOU want"?

"Eva smiled at HER seductively"... cough, him, cough.

He has breasts?

Minor Nitpick but how else are you going to learn right, anyway the way you phrased it (His smile widened and kissed me again)makes it sounds like his smile is what kissed her this and the last tie and not him, so I would add the word he after the and so it reads, "his smile widened and HE kissed me again".

What she what do for him...