Dark_Slayer_5427

Hermano la historia esta muy buena ni me da tiempo para poner un comentario simplemente quiero leer mas jaja

Brother i think you are doing it great, just do what you think is better

Bro this is Magnifique

Bro con la manera en la que narras esta facilmente se puede convertir en lo mejor de danmachi en esta plataforma

I really enjoy the protagonist as it's something new, it's really entertaining to read and, the author is doing a great job .Now the plot, I like the theme that if it focuses on his revenge. I liked some changes that the characters have, in general it seems to me that it is something that is totally worth reading

It is an interesting idea but being able to get new powers is something very common, but the protagonist's own power could make the story have another twist. If the author does it right it could be a good work

the only thing on a par with Chaos is Order