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Someone has no life 💀💀

He didn’t even do the chant :<

Guess you’re also stupid

To Give Attention to the reason, people skim over reviews with average ratings. And what’s your reply to my criticism?

Again I don’t hate your work, I read it because it was interesting im only critiquing some parts of it.

If the MC had watched Frieren in your fanfic then the mc would know that there are demons who hides there hostility to humans and strike to cause the greater casualty. And hiding the fact that you are from a race that views human as nothing more than insects, greatest threat towards humanity, the race the is known to kill human just because, Genocide humans on a daily basis, then yeah it’s a pretty big deal, especially to someone that’s partly human, and he has no means to confirm if she telling the truth, like I said blind trust.

💀Have you read or watched frieren? And there you go again about discrimination and ignoring my point of Himmel. Discrimination is an “UNJUST” treatment, then it implies if a majority do bad things affect the minority that do good, However the Fantasy creature of Frieren, the demons are just meant to be BAD, no exceptions have ever been a demon that does not kill humans, even the few who wants to understand humans; Macht and Solitar, are the most Dangerous that killed more than those who didn’t want to understand humans. In the end Demons are just “Intelligent Predators”. they are simply incapable of doing Good or be considered good. Solitar( a demon) even praised it as “Demons cannot understand the way humans think just as humans can’t understand the way insects think.” A suggestion on my part would have been the half demon to actually try to kill the mc but her human side fights her demon side. And again my criticism is not on the half demon but in the decision of MC and especially Himmel to trust a demon. The only thing you are repeatedly saying is discrimination and Half demon while not addressing what I’m critiquing. Why did Himmel trust his child with a demon? It would have been simpler to say “ because Himmel this Himmel that” but with an understandable reason. Why did the MC trust a demon while knowing what are demons are? I’m not asking why the half demon wouldn’t kill mc.

I never told you to do anything 💀 if you think that you can post anything without expecting criticism then just don’t. And what I’m talking about is the stupidity of the MC, and Again there are demons who don’t outright kill people, an example of this is the demon child that appeared in frieren. I’m not complaining about the half demon but the blind trust given, Mc stupidly, and the ignored deciet.

That is literally the premise of frieren that “all” demons are evil regardless of they are children or adult, trusting one would completely go against the original narrative of frieren. And the MC knowing this still trusted the Demon even after he was deceived, is that not stupid?

💀you think he won’t kill a demon that is with his child? After all his life fighting demons and that one time he trusted one it resulted in death? That he would conveniently trust this demon not thinking of the danger his child will be? It’s like trusting the creatures you have been fighting all your life with your child, it has already happened once why would you think he would risk trusting one again? And please don’t say he trust his child, as if it were put into perspective it will be like trusting your children with fire