the_eldritch_truth

Same man, I had 4 books that I love, 3 got disconnected and 1 finished.

Thanks for the update.

Me too man. Me too

Okay so I just finished the 47th chapter.... And I'm not gonna lie this novel is extremely good and addictive, and I'm going to tell you why. Writing quality: the first 1-30 chapters have some minor grammatical errors And after 30 chapters the grammatical errors are becoming less in numbers. So over all: a little bit of errors here and there, but nothing too major. Updating stability: One chapter a day. But if it was up to me, I would prefer 12 chapter a day, that's how good the story is. Story development: not world breaking, but really, really fun. with some comedy here and there. It basically starts with the mc getting reincarnated into a ergo game that involves'capturing' woman and making them fall in love with the him. That includes: hes mother/sisters/aunt and many more. It's honestly very fun seeing him try hard and then get the fruits of his lobar.that's the basic premise. But don't misunderstand Of course there's a plot and a good one it that, it's not just about courting woman, but it's the focus of the story. Character design: pretty good, everyone has their own personalitie, but no character is really explored. So that's a shame, but hay I'm not going to complain. World background: the world actually feels Rich and with hidden lore. And I hope the writer can expand on it.( But the writer said he is just writing this for fun and Will drop it when he gets bored, so it's hes chose not mine 😅) bonus category: the 's ex' is Good and has a lot of details.( There's no actual penetration UP to this point, just for play, and your going to know the reason if you read it.) Overall: a good novel for those that fancy some good 'se x' and a plot to go with it. Definitely one of my top 10. And a give it: 8.5/10 I highly recommend it to people. suggestions for the writer: 1. Make the world a more mysterious Place.(add some folk lore that Will happen in the future or something. I recommend you read "reverend insanity" and get some inspiration for the world building, But add your own twist to it. Cause reverend insanity, is the king of world building and can give you some ideas on how to handle things. 2. Add a little more depth to the characters. 3. Expend on the blood line system and the original owners of them. 4. You've got to work on hand to hand combat choreography. Because it feels a little underwhelming. And that's about it. Note: I know it might seem like I'm demanding or telling the author what to do. But I'm honestly so worried that this novel might become bad. Because it's so, so Goddamn hard to find a good novel with a promising future AND an author who actually listens to hes fans. And if I'm being harsh, it's actually from my love of this novel and wanting it to become number 1 on this site. Because if the author continuous on this road he will get big. Mark my words Thank you for reading.🤍

Good chapter 😌

Thanks for taking the time of your day to write this novel🤍

This novel is really really good. Honestly surprised. The author should be proud of himself 👏👏.

Holy shit. This chapter almost killed me from laughing. Fucking hell🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I think you might have misunderstood me "friend", I'm not going around ordering people everywhere,I just give the author an interesting idea that can make the story a little bit better. So stop talking about how other people should Feel when the person in question does not care.🤦

No. That's pretty much it.👌