LokeErBest
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LokeErBest4dComentado porUgh
"I'll pay attention sis."- LokeErBest5drespondió a God_of_hentaiPlus Ultra and all that shit.
- LokeErBest5dComentado porYou have two days to give me what I want (which is comments) until I'm satisfied, and if you don't? Well… bye bye hostage for the next week! Mwahahaha!
- LokeErBest7dComentado por
You need to ease up the long wall of text. It dosent feel natural.
With the necessary information provided, my host gave Thor the advice he clearly missed from his father's speech, "Cool, well not cool for you, but in more of a general sense. Odin has basically spelled out what it is you need to do in order to re-gain your worthiness, you just ignored it or were too shocked at being banished to notice. You were selfish and arrogant, so do the opposite. Become more considerate of others and stop thinking you're right all the time or that only you know best. As far as stupidity goes, well that can't immediately be solved, but if you listen to others and follow their advice then I would argue that's a sign of intelligence. Since you've introduced innocent lives to the horrors of war, now you need to protect them from war. Basically, think about innocents before heading into a fight or make them a priority during a battle so that they come to no harm. See, easy enough right?" - LokeErBest23dComentado porRocket looked at each of their faces, touched by their concern and their unwavering support. A small, genuine smile tugged at the corners of his mouth. "You guys got nothing to worry about. I'm just grateful we're all here, safe and together..."
- LokeErBest1mthComentado porWithout hesitation, she grabbed his hand and placed it firmly on her breast, a silent dare in her gaze that seemed to say, "Do it. Fuck my boyfriend."
- LokeErBest1mthComentado porCh 5 Chapter 5: Sticky Trouble
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You better save the otter aswell, my heart can't handle her dying again.
A/N: 2450 words :) ps- Peter is about about to meet/save Rocket in the newest chapters on patréon, if anyone is interested… - LokeErBest1mthrespondió a Weenie_Hut
imagine respecting women
Glancing at his right hand, Peter mumbled, "Looks like it's just you and me again, old friend..." - LokeErBest2mthComentado porStomach, kidney, pancreas. So many snacks, so little time.
- LokeErBest2mthComentado por
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A/N - All the feedback so far has been extremely helpful, so thank you very much ❤ If you wouldn't mind, please continue to provide feedback on my writing as it helps me to improve and give you all a better story. - LokeErBest2mthPublicado por
Didn’t really have high expectations when I saw that this was a symbiote fanfic, but this piece of art blew me away. It’s engaging and fun to read first of all. The characters feels real and not some phony dream versions. My only ick with this book is that I read the chapters faster then the author can make em’😂 5/5, excellent job. Keep going. p.s. if you ever decide to make a pa tr eon, you have my vote.
- LokeErBest2mthrespondió a a_a_6606
Okay and? Average length. I didn’t ask about yours now did I?
'How is something as big as that going to get inside me?' - LokeErBest2mthrespondió a Shanmay
They still have millions of active players but still, i get what you mean.
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