jordanonofiok98

Well written novel so far. My favourite Character is rondo btw. I like how each character has been introduced at the right pace with No rush as well as thr prologue that came before chapter 1. the prologue is important In briefley summarising the characters and the background of Shina. As the novel is not completely finished I’m holding back on awarding it a high 4 to 5 stars, however the novel so far is showing great promise accompanied by a well thought out plot and development scheme for each of the main characters, the Only thing I personally would change is building more relations between the characters and the reader before the first fight tournament. However, This did provide early action which turned out to be a very good and intriguing read.