FrikandelSpeciaal
Just a guy reading and enjoying himself, also trying to be a writer but have 2 jobs and school al 3 Horeca aimed, so barely have time, constructive criticism is something I highly appreciate!
Escribiendo
de lectura
860
Leer libros
FrikandelSpeciaal4 days agoComentado porThx for the chapter
- FrikandelSpeciaal9 days agorespondió a The_1_true_Mage
No
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agoComentado por
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agorespondió a TheUltimateP1e
There are some superhumans but mostly humans, I like to compare LOTR with the Witcher, though the Witcher is a little stronger qua worldstrenght
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agorespondió a Ragequit1
Yeah since everything inside the deer gets out like everything in his stomach wich would ruin the meat
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agoComentado por
Broke
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agoPublicado por
So the idea could be great and what I say don’t take it in a very negative way but I suggest to change the synopsis, I was expecting a canon Harry Potter who after jumping through the veil gets in a different world and will try to get back while getting stronger and meeting new people, instead we got a random in HP body with a system and dimensional trading, could be great, just not what is ever said in the synopsis, so for anyone who will try to read the synopsis is very misleading.
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agoComentado por
Somebody’s gonna dieeeee
- FrikandelSpeciaal3 months agoComentado por
Thx for the chapter
