John_nut

Yes the Author made him a coconut with no common sense

Ok just stick with one name please.

How old was the MC when he made that decision? Sealing memorys is not a small matter

This was hard to read bec of the grammer but what made it worse was the MC. You made the MC so Dumb and ignorant with no common sense that it became harder and harder to read after every chapter. Im actually suprised you made an MC like this bec your prev novel was decent.

I Will try to give this a couple more chapters bec i like your prev book.

How did he get into samar in the first place? I thought you cant enter the planet without victors permission?

Is he the butler or the husband? Why is he calling her my lady?

I had high hopes😑

This is weird man