Reality is my dream,Existence is my wish,I am all,And I am void.
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The repetition I'm talking about is saying one thing 3 to 4 times. If you read the chapter, you can count at least 3 paragraphs that Elena kept saying that he's the honored one and that he's using his strength as a shield or something. That was one sentence that was repeated multiple times, and there are others too. It delays the story from continuing and lengthens the chapter with unnecessary things. When people talk or argue, I assure you that they're more eloquent than that.
Guess the Author got tired of his OP MC
It seemed forced to be honest. I'm still of the opinion that he should have known and accepted all of this in the 1000 years of his existence, especially as he has his old life as a template to guide him. It seems like you're pushing for flaws in him to give Elena a special standing. It's not like she's the first person to say something like this the millennia he's been alive for. Also, the repetitions. You keep using different ways to say the same thing, which is annoying and I'm guessing is also caused by the AI. Which is why many readers dislike authors writing with AI. If you re-read the chapter and the previous ones, you would understand. Anyway, that's just my take on it. It's literally impossible and unrealistic for Elena to be the only one to have the guts to say this. Like I said before, it's like you just used a flaw, that should have been solved ages ago, to make her feel more special than she is. Even if the transformation already makes her so.
He's saying the truth tho, most people would ignore it, just like Peter did
He was literally the best actor for Spider Man, Tobey might have been the best for Peter Parker
1000 years seems too long to be in denial, especially when he has his past life to draw wisdom from. Realistically, people from our world in his position would not really be in denial, especially after a thousand years.