Tasin_Rahaman_1662

Dude, you should do more research on abilities, Escanor's grace Sunshine let's him harness energy from sun not day. The reason Escanor becomes weak at night because Sunshine is the ability of Mael a goddess clan member and Escanor's mortal body cannot handle it. At night Sunshine user is at his weakest form means he has no buff from the ability and is at his base power. MC in your fic is not a mortal human but Asgardian, at night his strength should be what a normal Asgardian would have(if he never trained in his life to get stronger and only relies on his sunshine ability, which in my opinion is pathetic). Other than this diffence in opinion with MC's ability. This fic is great👍.

I hope he will use Dust release too. I have never seen an fanfic that utilised dust release.

This is really one of the best One Piece fanfics. Don't stop Author-san👍👍

As every fanfic reader in Webnovel knows, it has been proven again that Mushoku Tensei is cursed. Another good fanfic went hiatus for rewrite. At least this fic broke through the curse of 20 chapters. We still have hope.

I don't know why, I dislike plots with revival of the dead.

Partical style shouldn't be able to kill him unless it's one shot or he is trapped within the jutsu. Logia body should be vulnerable to Senjutsu and Fuinjutsu. But in my opinion logia is the worst type of devil fruit to have in the world of Naruto, because chakra is made of spiritual energy and vital energy and Logia body is vulnerable to spiritual energy as haki is a way to use your spirit. So, logia body should only have half of the advantage it would have as chakra will be able to hurt elimentalization, but I think chakra will not be able to stop elimentalization as it is not pure spiritual energy like haki, it is mixed with vital energy.

His INT is 13, his mp should increase accordingly with his INT

The characteristic of the King Piece is power enhancement, as it can strengthen the user by several folds. The strengthening is possible on a magnitude of 10 or 100, as it can elevate a High-class Devil into power that is comparable to Ultimate-class and even strengthening some users to Satan-class powers. All of its users were capable of becoming the top Rating Game players, reaching the rank of the Top 10 Rating Game players. From dxd fandom. Hope you won't create random Satan-class powerhouses, as old satan faction barely has any ultimate-class among their ranks

This library infiltration is written fantastically, good job 👍 Author-san

"After dealing with all the dangers of the ninja world he will return to his beloved village".so between the love of his life (?) and village, he choose village. Can't underestimate Saritobi, even mc wasn't spared from will of fire🔥