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This is my honest review. The plot seems to be coming in really well, the character design is okay. Only have issues with a few mistakes here and there Hope you fix that😊😊😊
Well The book is a work in a progress can't lie about that but moving forward from the 5th chapter the plot and character starts to fall in line like pieces of puzzle. Also I really think the Author should improve his updating stability
Great First chapter