Akahime

The people on this site are spoiled to it. Many fan fictions here don't maintain a realistic tone, and when the authors write about children, they end up portraying them as adults. You're doing well, author. I think your portrayal of the child's personality is consistent, especially for a prodigious royal. No criticism.

This chapter and the previous one are easily two of the best so far. The scenes between Peter and Rumi were so CUTE! It was nice to see how the two of them interacted. great chapter! ;3

good chapter!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP, finally! It's great to have you back!

great chapter

good chapter!

wow. good chapter! I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

thanks a lot, author! btw, it was your fanfic “House Of The Dragon: ‘The Exiled Prince’ ” that got me started writing! ;3

good chapter! keep up the good work

ohhh, I see! I hope everything is going well in your new job! And okkkkk, I look forward to the return of the stories! btw, author, what tip would you give someone who wants to start writing fanfics but doesn't know where to start?