ARS_REIJIN
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ARS_REIJIN7mthrespondió a asphyxia778No it will become like ciel
Although William thanked the system, he didn't get any reply from it. The system only responded to inquiries and commands, and William had already gotten used to its character.- ARS_REIJIN7mthComentado por
It’s more suitable to use the term ‘ boss monster ‘ rather than leader
In this world, gates are chaotic spaces that connect to the human world and house hordes of monsters led by powerful leaders. The gates remain open until the leader is defeated, and then they close on their own after about an hour. To minimize the loss of human life, it is crucial to clear the monster gates as quickly as possible. Failure to do so will result in a gate outbreak, which allows the monsters to cross over to the human world and wreak havoc on innocent civilians. - ARS_REIJIN2yrrespondió a zaboc
he is Ren before he reincarnated as demon lord kretos. you could say Ren has reincarnated more than once
She was happy to see that no matter which incarnation he was in, Leo remained the same. - ARS_REIJIN2yrComentado por
'where the monster' not were
Ren, Lara, and Hilda were heading towards the village near the northwest mountains were the unknown monster was spotted. Their destination wasn't that far and they reached the village after walking for half a day. - ARS_REIJIN2yrComentado por
'this will be' you don't need to put is there
"Not really, I'm actually pretty excited about all this. This is going to be the start of my path to becoming a true hero. This is will be the beginning of my story. When other people tell my tale this is where it will all begin." - ARS_REIJIN2yrComentado por
it should be 'there were dozens' not their
The monsters were goblins, green skinned three foot tall creatures. Each one of the goblins had weapons at hand, spears, swords, clubs, and other assortment of crappy looking gear. Their were dozens of them approaching Ren and his group.