BlossomingShadow

Kindly upload the new chapters, and please check your grammar and punctuation. By the way, this story has great potential. Let's how you'll make this an interesting novel

It's really good to see the what if's on karna because I really like suryaputra karna and as an India it's really good to see someone actually writing even though it's a fanfic but it's based on our History hats-off to you brother and keep writing [img=recommend] 😁😊👍 P.S. please don't drop this novel

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I like this fanfic very much cause its very interesting and quite good as well though the translation is not that much good but it's quite good fanficand keep up the good work 👏

Thanks for chapters and please update it[img=recommend]

Your pokemon fiction novel is good and so does your imagination keep up the good work and keep writing this novel please don't dropped it[img=update]

This story is pretty good so please don't quit i request you

I am really impressed with story writing its really good so please upload volume 2 as soon as possible and thank you for writing it so beautifully 😁👍