Been world-building for a year for a novel I might or might not write... Hope I start writing soon... ;P
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Can't buy privilege again this month o7 the wait for chapters to catch up to here begins
invincible? careful there gu an, one might think inner demons have found their ways to your heart
the last sentence of this paragraph doesn't make sense
mistake at the end, sentence doesn't make sense
quite a few sentences that don't make sense in this chap, you might want to reread it author
yeouch for the angels ig tyftc
irl comes first :) best regards from france!
what to say... Evidently, this isn't a great work of literature, full of beautiful prose and descriptions. If it is, the translator (whom i suspect not only isn't english, but is pretty bad at english even for a foreigner) fails absolutely at his job. In any case the translation is pretty terrible, which is average on this site. However, one thing saves this novel: character development. Absolutely heartbreaking stuff, showing real situations: what every fictions ought to be, in my opinion. Ultimately, if you can support inconsistant nouns, pronouns, overall bad grammar, and pretty standard story development for a xianxia, read this. Probably one of the best of its category.