Zherie17
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I am an aspiring, ugly and poor fiction writer who loves arts, literature and anime from the Philippines.
2021-01-20 Se unióPhilippines
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Zherie172 years agorespondió a DARK_DEKUAw! Thank you so much for this comment. Will read yours if you have/currently writing one when I have time.
- Zherie172 years agorespondió a Hollowed_6791
Hi. I do not know what this means but thanks.
- Zherie172 years agorespondió a SoniiNaaz
thank you this comment. will read yours soonest
- Zherie172 years agoPublicado por
Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an intriguing plot though: 1. Good idea to start the story with an interesting prologue. 2. Good language control. 3. Few edits are needed to but, everything is just fine. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.
- Zherie172 years agoComentado por
Divide the longer paragraphs into two.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Zherie172 years agoComentado por
Revise this.