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Did you just say daki acts and looks like a .. . kid? Seriously ?
bro gave away 35 percent, actually 37 percentage if we consider the other guy who got 2 percent
gu chang approves
Thank you for the chapter. Hehe, I wonder how the corps and his girls would have reacted if Daki had also kissed him.
well he isn't that lazy, think of it like how doctor strange regained his hands ability, it is first very slow and then it goes boom. Also he doesn't have a very powerful system at this moment, it can only assist him in some things.
Yeah, I get it . I have tried in the later chapters to include the dates or references in the top for the times if it is needed.
it's a temporary nerf and will be very relevant to the plot later. This will benefit him massively in the later chapters.
what do you mean? If I haven't stated it in the line breaker, I will have given what time it is in the paragraph. If not I will have used some or the other events in as reference. If I haven't given it in the line breaker most of the times it implies that the time skip is very short. Though I do understand it is a bit confusing especially comparing the first some chapters and the later ones as I have tried to change my style and improve on things. It is my first fanfic so I do understand that things might not be good but I do try to improve.
Yeah, I know fighting Suigetsu would have been hard and it's his first C rank mission none the less. I'll elaborate more on that next chapter. And I really needed Ren to show of his skill for a reason *cough*Weasel*cough*. You'll see it in a day or two anyway .