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beware, yuri in this comics!!!!!..................

This is subjective review. Read at least few chapters to make your own opinion. Mix of fairy tales like Alice in Wonderland, Snow White and who knows what else. I wonder, is it lack of imagination that the author had to rely on other works? Apart from that the MC's character is unlikeable to me, always whimpering how unfortunate he is, always portraying him smart and then making him take some unreasonable decisions. I can ignore that he's weak, but not dumb lovestruck idiot. There's also a lot of boring internal monologs that I was just skimming through the chapters to not fall asleep. Annoying is also the constant comparison with the original game, talking about ingame story development, preparing some dumb af strategies which are immediately crashed when faced with "reality", or rather MC's(==Author's) nonsensical decissions. The grammar is good, althoug the writing style is not to my liking(too mane overly detailed descriptions of unimportant stuff or the lengthy boring internal monologs, even from side characters who disappears in next paragraph, who cares what that mob thinks, no need to spent 10 paragraphs on his thougts). I haven't read many chapters, but what I read was enough for me to drop this novel, and the way it started I highly doubt it will change in later chapters.

not a good start. whimpy subservient MC... will give it some chapters, but will probably drop,don't think he'll change...

thanks for saving my time,also dislike the one night stands 😩

I think I'm dropping this novel, not really interested in having to read non-MC adventures, and doesn't matter if it's for the sake of the plot.

...and there goes his high IQ...

Angel asserting dominance, again? 🤔

🤮

Living in delusion must be nice...

What comedy?