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I don't understand how it has 4.9 rating. It's not the worst spiderman fic out there but it definitely doesn't deserve such high rating..... Even if we ignore the issue with him not receiving Peter's memories; the timeline are all wrong. It's been only few days he started working in oscorps but he already received monthly paycheck. He uploaded his first video the night before, next morning people asking tutorials to create Web-shooter, like how the do they even know that he is using Web-shooter. Lost interest after 15 chapters.
Even if 'OC' couldn't you have come up with a name for FL other than Harry's girlfriend? Having a simple background like year, house would have been better too
At the very least ask why she is trapped before freeing her.. 🤬 I'm not even gonna comment about how the chapter.. That's just bullshit. Just hope the author won't ruin this one too. At least not this early.
What are the A-rank skill and S- rank talent? On which chapters is it explained? ................................................................
Fight sequence are extremely long and repetitive. There is nothing new, even the wordings are just copy/ paste. Started reading these because of Naruto: Sinigami. But it's turned out to be one of those Chinese translations where they repeat simple facts 3-4 times in chapter just to fill word count.
Now that he made a suit that that can take on almight, how are you gonna explain him fighting enemies with weaker suits that can be damaged by them.
The ending was so predictable It was kinda forced. Ironman-2 all over again.
He is not even 2 years old
If something happens to Candy there will be hell to pay.
There's way too much over-explanation. Even the smallest things are explained over 3-4 paragraphs ..... ............. ................ .................