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Plot twist, I never said I wasn't.

I don't really agree with your logic bro. Females will get married and have kids with the one they love. that's the nature of life. And this is another timeline. There are so many different possibilities that can happen in life. Minato could have been rivals instead of couples with kushina. Kushina might be the hokage. Who knows what happens in all these parallel worlds... Are you gonna stop just because of that? I mean how many fanfic MCs have you seen flirting with a kid Hinata? I see nobody complaining, Hinata married naruto and have boruto and Himawari, didn't she? What about Ino? It's all the same.

You pretty much complained without really giving a valid reason and left. How are we supposed to react?

I was considering not going to college. Now I'm back. I want that Ph.D.

Why would you help a retard who went full denial after he realised that his step mum was protecting him and her daughters even when she herself is being blackmailed? The guy is a symbol of beta Cucked MCs.

Although the fanfic only has 16 chapters, I'm already feeling like it's been quite a journey since MC transferred his memory to his past self. I didn't really see any grammar mistakes throughout the story. The actions of the characters are well justified albeit there are some plot holes visible. I'll still give this 5 stars since it's a unique story that will obviously be attractive to readers who like stereotype villain MCs.

Really good. I don't really know how to describe it since there's no such outlier in this whole fanfic. Characters have appropriate personalities. Writing quality is rough for a few chapters but smoothens out around chapter 7. Hiruzen is an actual good guy who's willing to protect innocents rather than a good old manipulator. Danzo is as usual. Minato was sidelined after the first few chapters since the show is about MC, not him. He's just there to follow MC like a sidekick in future chapters. All in all, a nice naruto fanfic with average potential to be in rank 10. Readers should read it casually not minding the mistakes since the author is still on his craft lol. I'll give it 5 stars to show my support.

Now I can see why her foot is called heavenly.

Canon Hiruzen definitely wouldn't say this but this version can.

my my... you have a good sense of taste brother.